The pain of love.

Am in doubt of what you feel
What you’ve shown me so far
Knowing you could give me more
I’m no longer sure who you are
I can’t believe what you told me
How I dread hearing those words
Giving me your thoughts in one motion
Everything just seems absurd
Why can’t I believe a word you say
Giving me that notion of deceit
Thinking about how much you love me
What we now feel is just until now obsolete
My dreams now feel empty
And my conscious drifts to a desolate place
I can’t seem to bare your lies
Can’t seem to look me in the face
And tell me you love me
These words knows no place in your heart
For you take me for granted
And that’s what tares me apart
No one likes to feel this way
The burden it fills inside
How you’ve forgotten about our love
How you’ve left it behind!

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  • ashan1614 on Apr 6, 2011

    I find myself in this exact situation at the moment. How does one move on while leaving a piece of themself behind?

  • Oversoul on Apr 6, 2011

    Well, in that case, some just have to go back and pick up the pieces, and some simply have to keep on moving forward.

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 6, 2011

    well expressed thanks

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