Sharing a passionate, steamy, moment with the one you so desire, creating something amazingly beautiful as you become one.

You must know how I feel

as you hold me near.

My chest against your chest,

yes, I think you know.

I think I can feel how

you are feeling too,

and I can tell it is immense.

Love and lace

takes up the space

of where we lay.

The warmth of our body

stimulates our senses

to the point we shudder

from the sweat

that drips from our flesh

as we are consumed by the other,

and so easily mesh.

What a beautiful union we form,

that can turn into a steady storm.

I become dizzy from

this stormy atmosphere.

Our breathing is all we can hear.

Wet breath sensually upon my neck.

My senses become a wreck.

All I want is for my body

to totally consume you,

and to merge my soul with you too.

I need your very being,

to fill me, as I am empty

and have been for so long.

Your body sings to mine

a beautiful song,

and I succumb to you

all of my femininity

to give you pleasure immensely.

Locked together at the lips

melted together at the hips.

Sounds coming from our throat

that has never been heard before.

They become muffled

by each hungry kiss,

and the intensity grows and soars.

Holding back is no longer an option

for either of us.

It is do or bust.

The next moment we ride

higher and higher.

The intensity has both of us 

holding our breath

until, until………….,

final release of our passion

causes us to cry out.

Amazingly beautiful.

Nothing left but helpless lovers in a clump,

having spent their inner lump.

Left to sleep and to rebuild

the desire that remains within.

Only to again bring forth and yield.

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  • drelayaraja on Feb 6, 2010

    Wonderful write.. Nice share :)

  • Midie on Feb 6, 2010

    Great romantic poem

  • jimbob1 on Feb 6, 2010

    DB…Love and Lace is intensely erotic. I love Love and I love Lace so how could I not love the two when you bring them together so well. Super great job of writing for such a pleasureable read. Thank you.

  • VTech on Feb 6, 2010

    Good Post, Thanks For Sharing.

  • Jay Knights on Mar 18, 2010

    Your writing turns me on so much. Your way with words leaves me seeing every moment in my minds eye. You are so obviously a lover of love and passion and deep, wet and hot animal lust.

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