Love Poem.

Passion

Your affection and warmth

and all the gorgeous things

The ardor we share

It complete my heart

and each day our

passion grows more

magnificently each day

I like the sense of way you make me so blissful

And the ways you exhibit you feel for me

You are with me forever

In a smirk, a remembrance, a mind  or time we share

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  • shivaleen on Mar 18, 2010

    Excellent sharing.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 18, 2010

    A remembrance,a mind we share,very well expressed and one can feel the bliss of sweet passion flowing in your words…very nicely written it gets one feeling nice and warm…thank you for the sharing….

  • Hepsi.M on Mar 18, 2010

    beautiful pic and a great poem

  • diamondpoet on Mar 18, 2010

    Very beautiful piece and I loved the pic.

  • Shamyl on Mar 18, 2010

    stirring poetry… good work

  • Citra Florenca on Mar 18, 2010

    beautiful poem, beautiful pic!

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Mar 18, 2010

    Great Work :)
    nice pic

  • Lord Banks on Mar 18, 2010

    A very well crafted poem, well done, LB

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 18, 2010

    Lovely poem.

  • The Last Ogre on Mar 18, 2010

    So much sincerity. A poem from the heart. Lucky guy he is.

  • Videomark on Mar 18, 2010

    Very nicely done.

  • bailieman on Mar 18, 2010

    Love shines through this poem.

  • Reilley on Mar 18, 2010

    Lovely emotions, nicely expressed. Keep writing!

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 18, 2010

    Nice piece.

  • Peter Cimino on Mar 18, 2010

    Awesome piece!

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 18, 2010

    nice and passionate!

  • Sharif Ishnin on Mar 18, 2010

    Like it is finely written. Magnificent poem.

  • giftarist on Mar 18, 2010

    I say very sweet.. A well crafted piece.

  • Yalonda on Mar 18, 2010

    Very pretty!

  • Paul Roberts on Mar 18, 2010

    Smooth and gentle, I liked the flow. Friend, fan, smile

  • Eunice Tan on Mar 18, 2010

    Well written.

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 18, 2010

    Great poem, love the pic.

  • seema1962 on Mar 19, 2010

    @Shivalean, @Stan wilson, Hepsi M, @diamondpoet, @Shamyl, @Citra Floressca, @Sohaib 9, Lord Banks:- Thnx for the comment.

  • Niti sharma on Mar 19, 2010

    well written.very nice

  • sambhafusia on Mar 19, 2010

    nice share.well done

  • Temjen Imchen on Mar 19, 2010

    Beautiful poem

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 19, 2010

    All above me
    Have consumed the words
    Of the entire dictionary
    They have left no more passion for me.

    If I were to start anew
    I wish you’d knew
    What a ………….BALANCE PL DO READ IN MY PROFILE

    GR888888 PASSIONATELY FILLED POEM

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 19, 2010

    All above me
    Have consumed the words
    Of the entire dictionary
    They have left no more passion for me.

    If I were to start anew
    I wish you\\\’d knew
    What a ………….BALANCE PL DO READ IN MY PROFILE

    GR888888 PASSIONATELY FILLED POEM

  • Judy Kaelin on Mar 19, 2010

    Very nice, I love the picture!

  • seema1962 on Mar 20, 2010

    @Darla Smith,@Geomorphosis,@Videomark,@bailieman,@Reilley,@Melody Arcamo Lagrimas, @Peter Cimino:-Thnx for the comment.

  • seema1962 on Mar 20, 2010

    @8Shei8,@Sharif Ishnin, @giftarist,@Yalonda,@Paul Roberts, @Eunice Tan,@Shirley Shuler:-Thnx for the comment.

  • seema1962 on Mar 20, 2010

    @Niti sharma,@sambhafusia,@Temjen Imchen, @LOVELY HONEY, @Judy Kaelin:-Thnx for the comment.

  • jimbob1 on Mar 20, 2010

    Wow, Seema…I didn’t know if I was going to find the end of the comments list…this is a beautifully written and deeply passionate piece in which you have captured the hearts and minds of impassioned readers…your fans…congratulations and thank you. And yes, I did vote that I liked it.

  • yes me on Mar 20, 2010

    Liked this very much cheers.

  • seema1962 on Mar 21, 2010

    @jimbob1,@matt devine:- Thnx for the comment.

  • Alive11 on Mar 21, 2010

    Very Impressive write

  • seema1962 on Mar 22, 2010

    @Alive11:- Thnx for the comment.

  • drelayaraja on Mar 23, 2010

    Great writing….

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Mar 23, 2010

    Behold, Seema writes again. And a lovely
    poem it is. Great passion and sensitivity and beauty are combined in one. Did I say I love it?

  • seema1962 on Mar 24, 2010

    @drelayaraja, @T.Rex McGoogle:-thnx for the lovely comment.

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 25, 2010

    seema, that was such a beautifully worded poem by yourself. just reading it made me feel like i was rising off the ground. you have defined love and passion with such purity and sincerity. in short, I LOVE THIS POEM!

  • Parabola on Mar 31, 2010

    ~beautifully written and filled to the brim with emotion that makes this a very fine write. Well done!!

    ~CJM

  • qasimdharamsy on Apr 2, 2010

    very nice one….I like it….

  • LilRoastBeef on Apr 10, 2010

    great job..i truly enjoyed

  • Domenico Cigliano on May 25, 2010

    Sweet and innocent, made me remember when…thank you

  • Joseph Scott on Jul 31, 2010

    Beautiful share! Great job. :)

  • ishinimrod on Aug 22, 2010

    Its nice…

  • George Bek on Apr 7, 2011

    A gentle and loving poem. Thank you. George.

  • suzain on Apr 22, 2011

    interesting

  • Nishasanthosh on Jul 15, 2011

    Too nice to express back in words. Loved every word in it.. :-)

  • lovelyhoney on Jul 20, 2011

    very nice to read again with passion

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