Love after supper.

She tapped my consciousness  waking my dreams

Love by candlelit the impression left upon my heart

The scene surreal as our imagination danced about

Dining in romance love doused by candlelit

Her eyes talked of something special

They held that topic throughout the night

Falling asleep aroused again and again

The flame’s heat never grew dim

What aphrodisiac was served to bring about such a magical mood?

Romance to-go, for we’ve had our fill

Later I would taste Mrs. Delicious

Finger tips tip-toed on lips as my voice whispered sweet morsels into her mouth.

Even though dinner was fulfilling

We starve to taste love by candlelit

A few hours remain before the sun rises

Finally, the deep craving was satisfied.

Candle layed wax with a flame unending

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Comments (7)
  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 1, 2010

    Very lovely*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 1, 2010

    Beautiful and good imagery.

  • cutedrishti8 on Jan 2, 2010

    Wonderful piece of write…

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 2, 2010

    Very Well written…

  • Linda Lori on Jan 2, 2010

    Sensual and romantic! Loved it!

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 2, 2010

    Lovely and romantic!

  • fashion girl on Jan 2, 2010

    A nice poem with good rhythm….

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