Love by The Minute

Aiyanna on Nov 12, 2010

I a tired of longterm love… Let me love by the minute.

Come to my hideout and gently play,

I need you now I need you today.

I no longer feel that love within me

All I have is passion so free.

Come on now and share a tryst

I would join you and I insist

I am constantly moving

Round and round

Constantly turning

with no sight or sound.

For I move on without crime

Guess folks!!! My name is Time.

By Anisha Achankunju (C) 13th November 2010

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lillyrose on Nov 12, 2010
nice twist at the end, well written poem. I was wanting a hideout to play in to but mine was for other activities!
Vivek Ratan on Nov 12, 2010
Lovely is your poem

Nice is its rhyme

Keys are on my hands

And its comment time

I need you now I need you today is great, Anisha
albert1jemi on Nov 12, 2010
great share
PSingh1990 on Nov 13, 2010
Nice Share.

Hi there!