The purpose of this piece of prose is to describe an ironic love story that I dream that the gods decide was too pure to be seen on this earthly world.

Love is just like building sand castles under heavy rain

But still I must endure all the pain

Despite doing everything I have nothing to gain

But then, unlike building sand castles under the rain

My love for you will not vanish, it will always remain

Love is just like writing messages in the air

A crazy kind of gesture no one would ever dare

Yes, its stupid but I don’t care

But unlike writing messages in the air

I can break my silence whenever I feel jealousy I couldn’t bare

They say when you find the love of your life time will be stopping

But despite all the joy and happiness love may bring

Love can sometimes be ironic and very disappointing

Just like loving a person who doesn’t love you back

And what pains the most is that very fact

That despite everything you’ve sacrificed

You still haven’t gained anything.

Author: miho koike

Publish by: melphens

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Comments (8)
  • carissimi on Aug 25, 2010

    this is beautiful

  • drelayaraja on Aug 25, 2010

    Very nice share. Lovely poetry

  • arohi1988 on Aug 25, 2010

    simply cooooooollllll……

  • L R Humphries on Aug 25, 2010

    Clever and well written, thanks for the read….

  • akira14 on Aug 25, 2010

    yes love is ironic and unpredictable. Very nice poem :)

  • miss suger on Aug 25, 2010

    this is a really good poem, keep going

  • zain0077 on Aug 26, 2010

    Lovely poem

  • monica55 on Aug 27, 2010

    Love is a very enigmatic phenomenon for no-one knows why and how we fall in love. Yet we all do at some point in time. Keep on with the strength of your love. A excellent share.
    Monica.

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