I’ll devote my entire self for this wonderful catch.

You seem to be prevalent.
So passionate, yet fun of the indolent
I seem to be a vent lent.
A shining armor and light of a fluorescent

You’re very vocal, who lives so natural;
A dream massage of prince’s and princess’s funeral
I was tamed to be aloof…
To be sensitive and careful in each terminal

It’s easy for you to capture one’s heart and be loved.
To master each move of love’s criminal act
I’m a veteran who falls in each moment of time.
A sorcerer dreaming to encounter a dumpy Mac

Visibly, I may be judged as tough.
Thought to be wiser than those who nods
Though for a fact I’m nude clay
That waits for someone who’ll take away my buds

Believe me I’m a clown who laughs for a while.
For a piece of chocolate, flower and balloon is worthwhile
A letter, a composition and a song will be too much
Just try me before life’s lost and my heart can’t touch
This may be an ultimate mismatch
But, I’ll devote my entire self for this wonderful catch.

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Comments (11)
  • Nainesh A Jadwani on Feb 4, 2009

    Thought Provoking.

  • 2tet on Feb 5, 2009

    That was great analysis… Indeed, this composition is provoking… hehehe…

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 8, 2009

    Very well written, it made me smile

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 8, 2009

    Human relationship are tough.. You captured it well!!

  • Blue Buttefly on Feb 9, 2009

    wonderfully written!

  • Denis on Feb 9, 2009

    Wow……very well said, the mesage is so strong

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 10, 2009

    are u also from phillipines par excellent friend till our end rgds
    lovely honey

  • Deathsintokit on Feb 12, 2009

    Interesting…somehow beyond all the noise we find ourselves loving the unknown. Takin the risk is the pathway to a lifetime of little regret.

  • Ella Currence on Mar 5, 2009

    very well written I like it.

  • God's will on Jul 9, 2009

    I love that poem,I would like to write like that but I’m affraid to fall in love oncemore,cuz every letter has a reply.

  • write me on garygeffranel@yahoo.com on Jul 9, 2009

    it’s the same God’s will

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