Feelings felt while separated from the one you love…

Oh how I miss you so very much

Your not here for me to touch.

No soft kisses when I awake,

For your not here for goodness sake.

Ten thousand miles away you lay,

While here on the far side I am made to stay.

I miss your voice and your shoulder at night,

hoping inside everything will work out alright.

Your in my thoughts and in my prayers,

because I love you I am the one who cares.

Be safe for me my precious one,

when you awake from the warm sun,

Soon together we will be,

not alone but two as one.

More of mine:

Thankful For You Both

Summer’s End

Triumph of a Soldier

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 25, 2009

    when hubby is a soldier

    we all pass days in anticipation

    till he does happen to finally return

    good lovely poem

  • Will Gray on Oct 25, 2009

    Very beautiful and touching. God Bless you and yours!

  • ken bultman on Oct 25, 2009

    Heartfelt and shared by others like you.

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 25, 2009

    Very beautiful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 25, 2009

    Beautiful words for a loved one.

    Christine

  • Guy Hogan on Oct 25, 2009

    It is difficult being away from the one you love; but that makes the reunion so much sweeter.

  • Petalm on Oct 25, 2009

    A well written poem.

  • Kelly Melang on Oct 25, 2009

    Great job, sometimes even just a day is painful

  • CA Johnson on Oct 25, 2009

    Your poem is really beautiful. I agree that it can be really hard to be away from the people that you love.

  • Joe Dorish on Oct 25, 2009

    Expressed very well!

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 25, 2009

    Very well wrtitten..I agree with Guy Hogan

  • papaleng on Oct 26, 2009

    Very beautiful and well-expressed poem.

  • Papa Sparks on Oct 26, 2009

    This was very beautiful and well-expressed. I know this feeling all to well being separated from my wife Aon and two boys, Jeremy Aaron and Bia.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 26, 2009

    my second visit shows

    love is not that far away

    whereever we maybe

    love shall always come our way

    lovers hopefully for ever do stay

    they never really

    true lovers

    that is ever stray

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 26, 2009

    happens to be a third now was checking back

    i miss u poem

  • STEVE666 on Oct 26, 2009

    Great verse.

  • monica55 on Oct 27, 2009

    Very heartfelt and caring.
    Monica.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 16, 2009

    I can feel your lonely pain. I have been there.

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