A saddened composition, replaced love with hatred.

I don’t know you
You don’t know me
I always see you
I use to smile for you

I got a crush on you
I wish to frequently have your view
I became a fan and then I admired
Sooner self-groomed and all I tried

Now I fell
Yes, I can tell
But you foretell
I’m bad and cruel

How can you judge?
For a very short surge
Refused me; blocked me
An invitation of bended knee

Deeply in love;
Though no talk, no encounter
Helpless devotion to perfection
Soulful inhibition for your protection

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  • annalisa on Nov 26, 2008

    hi;hlo;;; can u be mai fwend”"”"”"

  • 2tet on Nov 28, 2008

    Hi Annalisa,

    Thanks for the invitation…

    Of course, I’m willing… just add me up.

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