Love in First Sight

cathyjones on Oct 15, 2010

Tags: attraction, city, Counter, Country, earth, emotion, first, globe, hospital, in, love, mall, road, Shopping, site, sky, street, strike

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Poem.

One day

i went to market

to buy something

in a very close street

i entered in a shop

on the counter

i also be countered

by beautiful eyes

and also i fell

in love as she was

this was my

love in first sight

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Comments (11)

Allison Jae on Oct 15, 2010
Romantic and sweet.
T. S. GARP on Oct 15, 2010
Eyes are windows into the soul.
overclocked on Oct 15, 2010
oh i believe in love at first sight..nice poem
sareenkhan on Oct 16, 2010
thanks !
Crystal31 on Oct 16, 2010
great poem!
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 16, 2010
when someone looks into my eyes
he or she
and be a girl or a guy,
they all get mesmerised,
whats in my eye?
can any one guess
its your reflection
i prfessss
and when you hold my eyes,
can you see
what happens to me
i can the whole world
in you carefully see
and that’s why
they all look into my eye
and want to love me
Ukrainian on Oct 16, 2010
Cute and romantic…
joyhyena29 on Oct 17, 2010
great post^^
Raj the Tora on Oct 25, 2010
nice one, but isn’t is love at first sight
Akiong on Oct 25, 2010
Did you ask her phone number?
pattiann on Oct 25, 2010
That’s the way it was with my late husband. I looked at him and knew he was ‘the one’. Good poem!

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