Love in Our Shadows

T.Rex McGoogle on Oct 24, 2009

Tags: having fun, male and female, shadow lovers, silhouettes, the finale for the live couple, wall images

We seldom notice our shadows on the wall when we’re in each other’s arms.
This guy does and he’s taking his imagination way out there. After all, it is the last time for the real male and female.

our shadows

come together

on the wall

they must think

we still

have it all

just this final night

and we’ll be gone

one last time

for the good times

we have known

our silent partners

never had a fuss

they’re still

having fun

being us

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Petalm on Oct 24, 2009
Beautiful.
ceegirl on Oct 24, 2009
Excellent
Debra. on Oct 24, 2009
They do paint a beautiful picture. Lovely work!
ashan1614 on Oct 24, 2009
Beautiful, yet sad when you really think about it. The last time together….
cutedrishti8 on Oct 25, 2009
Excellent work..
Sourav on Oct 25, 2009
Very well written!
Tanya Wallace on Oct 25, 2009
This is a very creative, touching and heartfelt poem! Beautiful work,it really touched my heart!
Joe Dorish on Oct 25, 2009
Shadow love
Joie Schmidt on Oct 25, 2009
Very nice, peaceful.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Jane Jane on Oct 27, 2009
nice piece.
CA Johnson on Oct 28, 2009
Your poem was really beautiful.
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 1, 2009
Such profound beauty

That even shadows will smile

All that wee while

They are one upon one

When we two part

Shadows too shall depart

They’ll cry behind unknown doors

As we then lay on only floors
lillyrose on Nov 1, 2009
Great simple poem, quite romantic!
Phill Senters on Nov 2, 2009
Shadows having fun. Never thought of that. Guess it ’s OK for the last t time..
Goodselfme on Nov 3, 2009
There is some hint of gaity then words dripped with a departure of that happiness. I was enthralled with your purpose and strength. thank you!
Teves on Nov 3, 2009
Well done…
Colleen Ranney on Nov 4, 2009
Yet another great expression. I agree romantic tribute.
Kitty Starwizard on Nov 7, 2009
Interesting…paradox of the shadow…I like Kitty
Svetlana Cherevik on Dec 4, 2009
lovely!

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