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Love in The Mist

Lady Sunshine on Aug 21, 2009
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Veiled in a kiss.

Meet me in the forest
Oh chivalrous one
In the morning dawn
Where love begun

In a wispy haze
Drifting upon a breeze
A showering sweet bliss
Kissing the velvet leaves

Lie in love’s mist
Let it fall like dew
Ravished within our tryst
Shimmering like a jewel

A frozen splendor
Wet with rapture
In our surrender
Of utter passion


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  • Michael Degenhardt on Aug 21, 2009

    This has such wonderful visual imagery, allowing the reader to not only see but be a part of. A beautiful write.

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 21, 2009

    Well written with lost of passion. Like it!

  • ken bultman on Aug 21, 2009

    Now that is what I call a romantic poem. Very well done.

  • papaleng on Aug 21, 2009

    good imagery and very romantic.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 21, 2009

    Such a beautiful and romantic piece.

    Christine

  • kathie107 on Aug 21, 2009

    Lovely writing, So romantic.

  • Shirley Shuler on Aug 21, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, how beautiful and romantic, you always write with such passion!!

  • Lostash on Aug 22, 2009

    You are THE romantic of Triond!

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 22, 2009

    very image provocing and passionate, keep up the great work :)

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