Love is nothink without you, because Love is you…

So many people tell me about the truth of love
Somebody told me- love is happy,
And the others told me- love is pain
They said- love is life,
But some of them told me- love is nothing
I don’t understand…

And you,
You didn’t say anything to me
Not even when I was asking you
You’re so quiet
But why?

Why, everytimes I see you
I always feel like I’ve known you for a long time?
And more than that-
I feel happy
I feel free

And now I try to make my own description about love
I know it sounds ridiculous
But maybe the true love… is you

Love doesn’t need to speak
Love will show you its way

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  • Spinc3ll on Mar 12, 2010

    Puisinya bagus..

  • Joanne Teh on Mar 17, 2010

    Nice work, tianloveone. But i have 1 question,
    you write “Love is nothink without you, because Love is you…”
    I am a little bit confuse. the “nothink” is “nothing” or “no think” ??
    haha, just a question, hope you don’t mind :)

  • tianloveone on Mar 30, 2010

    haha..i’m indonesian and sometimes i’m makes some mistakes..of course, never mind.. :-)

    btw, may i add you as friend in triond community?
    may we can share link each other and you can checked my content next time :-)

  • lirpaenna on Mar 30, 2010

    this is sweet. =)

  • tianloveone on Apr 1, 2010

    @lirpaenna : thx :)

  • Bikash singh rajbanshi on May 26, 2010

    very2 nice!!

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