Love is the hardest thing God asks us to do. It’s why our world and our relationships are in such turmoil. Love keeps a lopsided score.

An old timer once told me,

love her wrong, love her right

it don’t matter as long as it’s love

Cause love has no right or wrong

love is love, nothing else need be involved

it doesn’t need flowers or walks on the beach

those things help but won’t add to its mystic

love is quiet and will not boast

love is realizing when you’re too loud

quietly apologize and say it more gently 

love is comprised by our failures

it gives us a chance to succeed by

saying I’m sorry  

It’s not quick to anger

doesn’t deal in ultimatums even though we do

Love reveals our vulnerabilities

Its learning to argue without losing your mind

love takes maturity, plus the mindset of a child

Love is forgiveness, sacrificing one’s self

for the welfare of others

Sometimes love is not sacrificing anything at all

Sometimes love is taking care of self

so that you may receive the love

that others are trying  to  give

Love turns to hope when there’s

nothing left to give. It returns as faith

with the promises of tomorrow

Love sets people free without condemnation

Love is here and now & now and then

Love takes time. We often end it before 

we ever gave it a chance to begin.

Its attractive at first then loses its luster

it takes work to shine

 like grandma’s tarnished silver

Love is confusing when we use our feelings

Love is the life energy that flows between people

It shines in a smile and grows in a tear

Love is a shoulder where troubled souls call home

The wrongs in life is what makes love right

but in order to see it, you must first believe it

love is the foundation from which

all commandments begin 

Love holds on when your grip slips away

love is reaching into the past without

settling old scores. Love done correctly

has  a  lopsided  score

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  • ashan1614 on Dec 1, 2011

    Love, real love, is not an emotion but an act of sheer will. Love based on feelings and emotions changes at every whim. When we truly learn to love and are determined to do so, the score often gets lopsided because we will love in spite of whether we are loved in return.

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 1, 2011

    Excellent! This is so true.

  • Karen Gross on Dec 1, 2011

    A lot of wisdom woven into these lines of beautiful verse. I especially like the lines:
    “Love is the life energy that flows between people
    It shines in a smile and grows in a tear”

    I think this is the best definition of love that I have read in a long time.

  • Giovanis Sandi PutraLucifer on Dec 2, 2011

    good keep continue.

  • Starpisces on Dec 2, 2011

    very lovely poem again, Lewis, you write very good love poems.

  • realityspeaks on Dec 2, 2011

    Beautiful.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 2, 2011

    Wow! That is a special kind of love that so many of us wish we could receive. A really beautiful poem.

  • Val Mills on Dec 2, 2011

    What a beautiful poem. I especially like the lines ‘it takes work to shine like grandma’s tarnished silver’. Thank you for giving us all a wonderful piece of writing to enjoy.

  • stonecutter on Dec 7, 2011

    nicely written

  • ittech on Dec 9, 2011

    has no correctly or wrong
    love is make out, require be involved

    this is beautyful

  • ittech on Dec 21, 2011

    An old timer once told bon
    Wrong love her under calderon
    Matter as long as its fur
    Has no right or lockout fur

  • erika on Dec 23, 2011

    Great read. So very true. I loved it. Aunt E

  • ittech on Dec 31, 2011

    XLNT post

  • ittech on Feb 16, 2012

    Wonderful piece of writing. This is mind-blowing stuff, my friend.

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