Love Lies Bleeding

Lady Sunshine on Aug 8, 2009

True love spills crimson red…

Where does my heart lie?
In the depths of your eyes?
Or the delicate, whispered sighs?
When your anguished soul cries?

Lay in love’s bed
Rest your weary crown
As I kiss your forehead
Slowly, your sorrows drown

Languorous lips linger
As true love lies bleeding
In breathless surrender
An aching soul seething

Give in to love’s lust
Yield implicitly to its trust
Delight in its torrid caress
As our twin hearts coalesce

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Christine Ramsay on Aug 8, 2009
That is such a beautiful, romantic and well written poem. Good work.

Christine
papaleng on Aug 8, 2009
I really like the flow, very fluid and the thoughts are sweet and romantic.
ken bultman on Aug 8, 2009
Delightful, well-written poetic love song.
Ruby Hawk on Aug 8, 2009
Erotic and romantic, well done.
Shirley Shuler on Aug 8, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, beautiful and romantic, written with heart…
Lostash on Aug 9, 2009
Yes, this is a lovely piece. My fave of yours so far!
Anne McNew on Aug 13, 2009
well written. very romantic, too
Nisa West on Aug 13, 2009
Sweet and sincere. I love:
“…Give in to love’s lust
Yield implicitly to its trust
Delight in its torrid caress
As our twin hearts coalesce.”
Now I must read all your poems!

Hi there!