A poem about for all those who have lost love to war.

Fruity scent,

sparks loves lament.

Marching band,

to war he went.

No more smiles,

or holding hands.

Broken dreams,

of wedding plans.

Never more,

on beds they’ll lie.

He will fight,

and surely die.

Upon a street,

on foreign land.

His blood spilt,

for another’s sand.

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  • oldster on Aug 15, 2009

    Very good Cupid.
    Suggest a more suitable name if you want to be taken seriously.

  • Brenda Nelson on Aug 15, 2009

    War… what is it good for?
    Population control, I guess is about it.

  • BradONeill on Aug 28, 2009

    I believe this is giving comfort and aid to the enemy. Actually I like the name unlike oldster but I dislike the message of the poem. The poem itself is good. There is a picture of a woman lying on the grave of her fallen husband that would be devastatingly effective with this poem. Not that I think being devastatingly effective is a good thing for demoralizing our troops but if your going to kill morale might as well go all the way with it.

  • ichyru rouge on Aug 28, 2009

    that was rly guud !!!! i dont care if it was depressing or anything. i liked it :]

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