A simple request…

Hold me
Touch me
Kiss me
Hug me
Want me
Love me
Just love me
Love me tonight

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  • Teves on Oct 27, 2009

    Very nice poem sunshine…

  • raman13 on Oct 27, 2009

    excellent

  • ken bultman on Oct 27, 2009

    A very straightforward plea. From what I have been able to discern regarding your personality I should think you would have little trouble having your requests granted.

  • Papa Sparks on Oct 27, 2009

    Beautiful my friend.

    Ditto Ken’s comments.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 27, 2009

    Lovely work. I hope you got your wish.

    Christine

  • Lostash on Oct 27, 2009

    We ALL love you, so don’t worry about that!

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 27, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, beautiful, I know you got your wish!!

  • giftarist on Oct 28, 2009

    Great piece!

  • papaleng on Oct 29, 2009

    I will my dear, just kidding. That was so sweet.

  • deep blue on Oct 31, 2009

    Hmmmmmnnn. Nothing different with the costume play. Still a lovely poem, lol.

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