very nice and touching,

I feel the heart ache, passion and vulnerable pleading in this piece. That takes great skill in such a short piece. Keep up the great work.

Best wishes.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

I think that it would be impossible for the writer to make good on his promise to his subject referred to darling in this poem. He can\’t do it because he doesn\’t have it to give. The fact that he has fear in his life proves this because perfect love casts out all fear. The writer of the poem needs salvation. When he is made complete in God\’s perfect love, he\’ll have that love to give. In the meantime, he can\’t give something that he hasn\’t got. He needs Jesus. (:

Very nice, and pretty.

I can feel the anguish in this poem and the ache for the beloved to relize what “he” is offering!!
Just a thought to Wordsword some might get a little agitated at you “preaching” or whatever. I don’t but then others might

Thank you Anon… I thought I was the only person that actually read the “poem.”

I\’ll give you a smile
It\’ll last a while
Don\’t leave me sighing
Don\’t leave me crying

I\’ll give you my heart
Don\’t break it apart
I\’ll tell you my fears
Wipe off my tears

I\’ll stretch out to you my open hands
Don\’t tie them with ugly painful bands
With honesty and truth I\’ve spoken
My heart is sad, so badly broken
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I\’ll be your one and only baby
It is my dream, there is no maybe

It reads like lyrics, so much anguish in this, nice work.