Love me please don’t go.

I went to the same this time
Easily the night’s lonely sad people
I dare not think too much
Because I am a person
Oncoming moonlight shadow lengthen
Aimlessly in the cold street
I do not have your news
Because I think you
Love me please don’t go
If you say you do not love me
Heard that you really do not export
Give me a little tenderness
Love me please don’t go
If you say you do not love me
Heard that you really do not export
Give me a little tenderness
Love me please don’t go
If you say you do not love me
Heard that you really do not export
Give me a little tenderness
Love me please don’t go
If you say you do not love me
Heard that you really do not export
Give me a little tenderness

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Comments (17)
  • irishpen on Jun 28, 2009

    This is great!

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Jun 28, 2009

    nice.

  • ZsenaKay on Jun 29, 2009

    I’m speechless!

  • Kairos on Jun 30, 2009

    Yes, I love your poem.

  • shyniielicious on Jun 30, 2009

    wow..nice one..what a heartfelt poem

  • scarletmoon on Jun 30, 2009

    awe…so sweet.Loved it!:)

  • Sean Michael Drake on Jun 30, 2009

    Very interesting. Flows nicely.

  • goodselfme on Jun 30, 2009

    So full of pleading and yearning.

  • genius on Jul 1, 2009

    almost Japanese in feeling and content

  • ceegirl on Jul 1, 2009

    I love your poem.

  • Sunshine11 on Jul 1, 2009

    I LUV THIS!

  • StephenJArdent on Jul 2, 2009

    Very nice.

  • lancepv on Jul 2, 2009

    right from the heart! :)

  • LiteraryPrincess on Jul 2, 2009

    Lover, not a fighter? :-)

  • Joanna Maharis on Jul 4, 2009

    The feelings throughout this piece are so beautifully expressed.
    I was able to connect with the narrator of this poem. It is your ability as a writer to connect with your readers which helps make this poem so potent. Well done.

    Take Care,

    Joanna Maharis

  • Francy on Jul 5, 2009

    well written…one of the best poems i have seen on Triond.
    Keep it up.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • Emmanuela on Jul 5, 2009

    Great

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