Love Rain

Linda Lori on Jan 6, 2012

Tags: clouds, fictive, fools, left, love, Mirage, Rain, Shallow, succumbs

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A cycle of desire and a mirage for fools…

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Like shallow puddles
left to evaporate,
love succumbs
to sweltering draw,
now, a mirage
of fictive pools,
housed in clouds
to rain on fools

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Comments (7)

realityspeaks on Jan 6, 2012
Beautiful words
Prometheus Ridley Scott on Jan 6, 2012
Simple but nice words.
okkhattak on Jan 6, 2012
I like it! thanks for sharing
yes me on Jan 6, 2012
Like this imaginative, piece Linda… I like clouds, I like splashing in puddles, and the passion of it all mmm cheers
Yvhes P. on Jan 7, 2012
very nice.I like it!
MJRapp on Jan 7, 2012
Very nice. Liked!
T. S. Lewis on Feb 15, 2012
Deep.

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