A winsome appearance leads to sarcastic reprimand…

Love is temporary.
Everything is for a short period of time.
We should invest with God.
Not with anybody
Never demand to have another body
Walk with faith
In losing tragic fate

Stop trampling on the pillow
Regret annoying wait at the window
Forbid stooping every time your crush wink
Avoid blushing even for a short link

A winsome appearance leads to sarcastic reprimand
It will just make you winnow an apprehending command
Believe that love is a wick; a vulgar and a cheap trace
A volatile feeling of dying distress and lying amaze

Your love will only get you on the wagon
And wobble a snooping dirty “baygon”
Instead of believing a Saigon,
Who’s on the lead of a fairy tale ambition
Realize that reality is you’re use for selfish completion
A fulfillment of a partner in this life of battalion

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  • papaleng on Jan 21, 2009

    a very powerful and emotional write.

  • 2tet on Jan 22, 2009

    Thanks Mr. Papaleng… Indeed, this is a new diversion in poem masterpiece. A modern way of love interpretation.

  • BeB on Jan 23, 2009

    nice!!!

  • 2tet on Jan 23, 2009

    Thanks Haidz for the comment…

  • Mervin on Jan 26, 2009

    Hello 2tet, If you could use a word of encouragement. Take a look at my material.

  • 2tet on Jan 26, 2009

    Hi Mervin,

    I believe you failed to read all my contents here at Triond. The poem you have read is a diverse composition. It is a modern way of poem writing. In order for you to become best of the best, you need to be versatile and flexible in writing. I do have compositions on encouragement… Take a look at them!

    Best regards,
    2tet

  • Worldsgreatestpoet on Jan 27, 2009

    Hi 2tet, I just stopped by this page and read your poem. I related it a little like shakesphere. It was different I liked it, but I could not keep up. I read some of your comments. This composition thing you need to tell me more about it. Check me out at dorisedixon.com or go to lifepoems.org to send me an email. I would love to hear from you.

    DePoet
    World’s Greatest Poet

  • IreniaPehuajo on Jan 27, 2009

    I really enjoyed it
    Bye

  • 2tet on Jan 28, 2009

    Thanks Depoet…

    It\’s a privelege to be compared with Shakespeare… Indeed, this composition is far different from ordinary pieces… It is diverse…

    Best regards and keep reading,
    2tet

  • 2tet on Jan 28, 2009

    Thanks Madamme Irenia for appreciation…

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