Love is the greatest force in the universe even in the family of galaxies, there’s nothing that can contend with the force of love in all eternities.

When the entire world is lost,
And all creatures doomed to destruction,
The seas, valleys, mountains and hills
Flattened and leveled off to the ground,
Can we still agree and joyfully give,
Thank and praise to the One,
Who created everyone and everything?

He has designed us to live,
And rule the world with love
To humanity and have dominion
Above all created beings,
And to be the keeper of the garden,
Places, lives, climate, and territories,
In justice, peace and brotherhood.

But now if we look around,
Things happened then otherwise,
Crime to person, property and environment happened,
Where then now is our responsibility?
Have we lost our sense of direction?
Or we self-destruct our planetary habitat;
Let us just be reminded to all of these,
That even if we don’t love the rules, love still rules!

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  • Jenny Heart on Sep 3, 2009

    Well done. Like it!

  • Shamanz on Sep 3, 2009

    ooh, well written. I expecially like the ending!

    max

  • Hugo La Rosa on Sep 3, 2009

    It’s a refreshing, worthy poem!

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 3, 2009

    A thought provoking and well written poem. Good work.

    Christine

  • Lady Sunshine on Sep 3, 2009

    Nicely done, giftarist!

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 3, 2009

    I certainly agree. Brilliant!

  • Collette Edwards on Sep 3, 2009

    a great poem that makes you think, great job :)

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Sep 3, 2009

    Nicely written. I’m afraid man is the animal that rationalizes–which means that what we do often isn’t precisely in the interests of the race as a whole.

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 4, 2009

    Lovely work indeed!Very thought provoking.The ending brought it all together nicely and the whole thing was cleverly weaved.Great stuff!!

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