Random emotion expressed in a haste.

The haunting stench of mistakes made and past,

Lest I forget and begin to heal when its so alive and real,

To grow out of the overbearing sense of guilt,

A stem that holds thorns without the presence of a rose,

A winter that produces only freezing rain,

Like words lost in a summer breeze,

Begin to come back and punish with the familiar song,

A heart once beating and alive,

A black vessel of deceit and good intention,

How a heart so full of passion yet a mind so blank,

I leave this world bitter and unsatisfied in a dreadful haste,

So kiss me softly and hold on to the person I once was,

Love me to death and put me to rest,

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Comments (5)
  • spiritualgrace30 on Nov 19, 2009

    this is beautiful!!!

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 19, 2009

    dats a wonderful composition..lovely!!

  • loualbert on Nov 19, 2009

    Nothing is expressed in a haste here; the poem seems and sounds as if it was carefully wriitten.

    This piece is excellent, and I like the diction employed here. Good work in your part.

    Please, read my stuff on the site!

  • Ayala Balar on Nov 22, 2009

    A stem that holds thorns without the presence of a rose.
    Inspiring : )

  • The Last Ogre on Dec 10, 2009

    Well done. I sense some irony though.

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