Three poems for the price of one.

You rose up, from the deep blue sea

Your tumultuous waves, crashing into me

Surrounding all of me, you would

Consuming me, as much as you could

You would float and hover, all-around me

Gliding gracefully, all-over me

Drowning me in you, with great abandon

Showering me with you, what sweet affection

Your waves would crest and peak, creating a spectacle

Completely engulfing me, reaching our pinnacle

♥♥♥

You came into my life
A boy with dark brown eyes
With a heart scarred by fate
Little did I know,
You were my soul mate

You came into my life
Gifting me with your friendship
In spite of my childish ways
You granted me your kindness
Something I could never repay

You were the one,
Who dared to love me
Even though I drove you away

You were the one,
Who dared to find me
Even though I ran away

You were the one,
Who dared to understand me
Even though I caused you such pain

You dared to love me
The only one who would

You dared to love me
The only one who could

You loved… me

♥♥♥

My beloved Hwang, this midwinter night is so cold without you
I long to capture the warmth of sweet spring
Folding it into a soft, inviting quilt
Tenderly unfurling it at night, till you return

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  • willie wondka on Feb 17, 2011

    lovely as always

  • sgkeat on Feb 17, 2011

    very nice, very romantic.

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 17, 2011

    Sweet and passionate.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 17, 2011

    Beautifully written, both passionate and romantic. Well done, Lady Sun.

    Christine

  • singming12 on Feb 17, 2011

    wow that is good

  • shobhana on Feb 17, 2011

    Great work of imagination

  • Larry Fish on Feb 17, 2011

    Great writing, so enjoyable to read.

  • Atanacio on Feb 17, 2011

    very nice I didn’t know you were discounting your poetry..hmm :)

  • moneynwealth on Feb 17, 2011

    :) very romantic, enjoy reading your poem ……..

  • moneynwealth on Feb 17, 2011

    :) romantic, enjoy reading your poem ……..

  • Erin Miller on Feb 17, 2011

    Great poetry! And thanks for thinking that way of Maximus. That is special to me. By the way, when do you plan on writing a romance novel? :)

  • giftarist on Feb 17, 2011

    Sweet!

  • Betty Carew on Feb 18, 2011

    If I had a favorite it would be the second poem Lady Sunshine it brings back memories for me. All of your poetry is awesomely beautiful. A very enjoyable read.

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 19, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, great writing, so passionate. I always enjoy reading your work!

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