Loved Up Birds

cardy on Nov 17, 2009

A little poem telling the story of what lenghts a male bird will go to, to get his female bird.

I puff out my chest,

I am doing my utmost best.

My colours of black red and blue,

they must give her a clue.

Dancing upside down,

bobbing my head as I begin to frown.

I let out my calling sound.

She just glances at me,

can she really see?

I shake my feathered tail as the purple shines through.

The skills I have been taught,

have done there full job lot.

As she approaches me,

so she did see.

I think to myself as I take her under my wing,

let the second dance begin.

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Comments (14)

Hansika on Nov 17, 2009
excellant share…keep writing…
Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009
Great poem!
Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009
A really cute and well written piece.

Christine
Themax on Nov 17, 2009
ver nice poem,Thanks
Goodselfme on Nov 17, 2009
You did such a wonderful presentation with your words. I felt as though I was seeing what you offered in this well written prose.TX
K.Reshma on Nov 17, 2009
Nice poem
Peter Cimino on Nov 17, 2009
What a sweet poem. Well done.
Teves on Nov 17, 2009
Nice one cardy…Keep sharing.
Aleena on Nov 17, 2009
Kinda cute I like it
Nice work :]
lillyrose on Nov 18, 2009
I love all your animal poems, another great write!
deep blue on Nov 18, 2009
Love must be wonderful when you could fly.
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 18, 2009
see you are undoubtedly

a lovely writer

so very much gifted

and hope some day

you will display

poems in a book form

or email to be uplifted

congrats to you

and thanks

for your everlasting appreciations

which i cherish most
Lee Ness on Nov 20, 2009
Hi Cardy,
Is this what people do when they are falling in love too.
Lovely very lovely write and poem.
You are very good and you keep things simple.
Thanks for the share
Lee Ness
cutedrishti8 on Nov 20, 2009
Another great piece

Hi there!