Appreciate beauty in its natural form.

Lovely, lovely girl, lovely

Just lovely,

But if I were you

I would have found

More loveliness

Once in the nude

After all it’s the mirror

I silently view

Yes when I am

All in my birthday suit

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  • neet on Oct 30, 2009

    Cool………..what you have here is a beautiful poem. Well Composed.

  • Elizabethabbott on Oct 30, 2009

    Quite lovely, Lovely!

  • Darla Beck on Oct 30, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 30, 2009

    lol. your too funny! But this is really creative.

  • lillyrose on Oct 30, 2009

    Lovely LH… a very cheeky, cute poem!

  • Sourav on Oct 30, 2009

    Well, I don’t understand your point of nudity here. Neither it made any sense to me…. ‘But if I were you

    I would have found

    More loveliness’

    Can you explain these lines please.

  • cardy on Oct 30, 2009

    A lovely sweet poem loved it!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 30, 2009

    There was some poet girl
    I guess
    Who was admiring herself?
    In the bathroom mirror,
    So I thought
    One rarely wears clothes
    Admiring oneself in a bathroom

    However thanks for Ur advice
    Well loveliness be it
    So be it

    Thanks Saurav,
    I see u have attempted
    To read two today

    I read a poem
    On the spur of the moment
    Off my cuff
    Write one comment
    Which instantly
    My trained computer
    Converts into a poem
    So as my lappy
    Winks at me
    I can see the poem
    Is then ready

    Thanks
    This one is for thee

  • ssaunders on Oct 30, 2009

    I totally understand this poem I do the same

  • larry84 on Oct 30, 2009

    thanks for the share

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