It discusses the two faces of love which can be both, either destructive or constructive.

The nucleus of lives
Destroys us for ever
Why is it so powerful?
Deviates our drives.
Single element unites
How can it ever wither?
But fate walks ahead
Loses its entire focus.
Time dims the mark
Says the whole world
Experience this shark
And mould your heart.

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  • SAKSHI on Jun 26, 2008

    AWESOME DEAR! BEING SO SHORT AND PRECISE…IT CONVEYS EVERYTHING.

  • ebazaar on Jun 29, 2008

    I read it 3 times. It’s deep and yes, i like it. Keep up the good work.

  • sardelli holmes on Jul 11, 2008

    the confusion which you have presented always remains nomatter howmuch we make efforts to get rid of it…nice expression!

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