Dreamy love of another world.

The sun glowed, your face radiated and my soul floated into the air.
Flitting about as an angel, tenderly gliding between clouds, in hopes of finding my true love.
This is how your smile makes me feel. Beautiful, joyful, carefree.
Nevermore will the illustrious dreams of old lure me away from the peaceful reality that can be.
Your embrace is what I long for but your spirit is as light as a mourning dove.
The physical elements will always allude me in this spiritual place, but nirvana is true jubilee.

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  • papaleng on Dec 21, 2008

    a very nice poem with clear flow and good choice of words.

  • Fegger on Jan 5, 2009

    “…and my soul floated in the air”—absolutely beautiful!!! One typo tho’…I think you meant to say, “Your embrace…”. This sounds like the relationship of my dreams as well…hope it turned out to be reality for you!

  • Juhls on Feb 12, 2009

    Thanks for catching that typo Fegger! I need to remedy it!

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