Sometimes the old lines are the best.

I always thought that I was above what’s called love at first sight
But brightly colored sparks erupted when we first met that night.
I made my way to her bar stool although I’m lost for a cool line.
I finally came up with an oldie–I asked, “Your place or mine?”
To my surprise she turned and said she really liked my style.
Let’s try my place, she said, and become friendly for awhile.
“Give me some time to straighten up a bit and come around at three
Tomorrow afternoon.”  She spoke while looking lovingly at me.
It’s a fine accomplishment when one makes a long story short
So I’ll not bore you with graphic details in this personal report.
When I arrived she let me in; she was clad only in nighttime wear
And led me straight to the bedroom like she had no time to spare.
Without telling secrets I’ll say in was a day I will not forget.
She knew more tricks than a circus pony–sheets were soaked with sweat.
I hated to leave while our hearts were beating to a phantom metronome
But I knew I must.  I asked her, “When do you expect him home?”  

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Comments (24)
  • Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009

    Very nice poem! :)

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 17, 2009

    Awesome! She knew more tricks than a circus pony. nice imagery

  • Ramalingam on Nov 17, 2009

    Naughty

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 17, 2009

    great

  • drelayaraja on Nov 17, 2009

    Very good one. Lovely

  • Jamie Myles on Nov 17, 2009

    Interesting tale of a clandestine incounter.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009

    You naughty boy, Ken!. I like it.

    Christine

  • K.Reshma on Nov 17, 2009

    Its awesome

  • Themax on Nov 17, 2009

    very romantic and naughty,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Goodselfme on Nov 17, 2009

    Well penned . I knew I was in for a good one as soon as I read the title. This swings, my friend!

  • Sheila M on Nov 17, 2009

    Very bad boy Kenny – a girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do…..next time don’t forget your underwear:)

  • Olivia Van Logum on Nov 17, 2009

    Ken – you naughty boy! I thought you were so sweet and innocent!! Great poem – loved it x

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 17, 2009

    :P

  • Nydia Esther on Nov 17, 2009

    LOL – I love your endings..

  • Teves on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice post ken…

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 17, 2009

    You bad, bad boy.lol Funny poem, did you get our before he got home?hehehe Always a brilliant ending Ken,I love your work! Very creative and fun piece!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 17, 2009

    LOL, that was great, it\\\’s good to see you writing again.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 17, 2009

    I wanted the graphic details. Oh, well, you can’t always get what you want but you can get what you need.

  • Aleena on Nov 17, 2009

    Naughty boy!
    Fun though, I love it!

  • deep blue on Nov 18, 2009

    She’s so kind to let you in before her man arrives to the scene. You have a way with words my friend. ‘been there, done that but not what you did.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Nov 19, 2009

    Just letting you know I stopped by and read it.
    later,

  • PR Mace on Nov 19, 2009

    Why Ken you do have a bad side. Enjoyed the dirty side of Ken.

  • wonder on Nov 25, 2009

    Cooly portrayed the worst.A great conclusion.

  • wonder on Nov 25, 2009

    Coolly.

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