Romantic foggy night for young lovers.

We walked together one night in dense fog

Streetlights had become only glowing spheres

No cars had ventured out to challenge this

The streets were left to lovers like ourselves

We heard muffled voices in the distance

Loving words much like those I spoke to you

There was a solidarity among lovers in that fog

And that thought brought new warmth to both our hearts

I remember that we kissed in that romantic diffuse glow

That you placed my hands on your now bare breasts

That I kissed and sucked upon your nipples

While your hands undressed me to my waist

One might have thought the dampness would be chilling

If it was, our bodies would not have felt it then

For we were burning with desire beyond all limit

And what cloths remained were quickly cast aside

You hugged me tightly around my neck, me you round your waist

I lifted as your legs circling around me

We fused into a single unit locked together tightly

Another statue indistinct in fog

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 6, 2009

    DIS IS REALLY SO PASSIONATE… WILL ARISE THE FEELINGS OF ANY1 WHO WUD READ IT..

  • Hansika on Nov 6, 2009

    in fact it arose my feelings too

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 6, 2009

    Great poem! Very passionate!

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 6, 2009

    are they having sex when he is hugging her waist, how does that work?

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