A butterfly seeks the perfect flower, like a man who seeks the right woman.

Photo by Lostash

Oh! My noble monarch!
You kiss my petals
You drink from my nectar
Your gossamer wings embrace me
Holding me softly
Your touch is deft and wispy
Tickling me
Eliciting a giggle
Your mouth caresses and strokes
As I, your perfect bloom
Tremble with delight

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  • ken bultman on Sep 13, 2009

    Metaphor or not, that was quite lovely.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 13, 2009

    That was absolutely delightful. Well done.

    Christine

  • Lostash on Sep 13, 2009

    Yes, that was beautiful! Great photo too!!! lol.

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 13, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, that was absolutely beautiful and as always, you do have a way with words, love the picture too!!

  • papaleng on Sep 14, 2009

    Oh! my friend that was such a beautiful poem.

  • Jane Jane on Sep 15, 2009

    lovely. it’s sweet and romantic.

  • giftarist on Sep 15, 2009

    Nicely done! Beautiful

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 15, 2009

    mmm romantic,

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