Forever lasts?

Are you a lover?

Do you love love?

Do you have lips of a lover?

Do you belive in poetic justice?

Do you find yourself thinking of love?

I hope I were you, or just like you

Or may I say I really envy ?

I am the pessimist, spoiler for that matter

No doubt if you listen to me I’d just but spoil ya’ date

I am that line that spoils the compliment…

I am that last vestige of hope inside you…
I am but everything that’s last…

I am a dream too far yet too close…

I am a dejected lover…

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  • FX777222999 on Oct 22, 2011

    Love poem to the max!

  • Krupali on Oct 22, 2011

    This should be your best and the reason is it describe you the best! The line, the climax of all your poetry works : “No doubt if you listen to me I’d just but spoil ya’ date”. That’s the key to you, you know.

    Guys, keep your distance from this devilish soul! ;)

  • Elove Poetry on Oct 23, 2011

    @FX thanx for feeling that way for my work, @Krupali… a conglomeration of views… is it a review or a critic…. and well, u r sure about one thing…. love is the devil and is coming for you

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