A poem….

Tiny pinpricks of light dot the black charcoal sky,

dark clouds hide them for a short time as they pass by.

I watch as they seem to flicker I feel my eye’s do deceive me,

the stars are not alone from what I can see.

As the silvery moon makes it’s presence known with a sudden cascading light,

once hidden by a veil that kept it from my sight.

You’re face captured in shadows and moon light,

you are picture perfect on this cold winters night,

I snuggle closer as we walk,

we have no reason to talk.

We are both content as we let our mouths meet in a kiss………

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Comments (10)
  • sambhafusia on Mar 17, 2010

    Great share..keep work on dear..

  • deep blue on Mar 17, 2010

    A romantic episode well expressed.

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 17, 2010

    a bollide’s smile, nice

  • Lord Banks on Mar 17, 2010

    Very good poem indeed, good stuff, LB

  • Lee Ness on Mar 17, 2010

    Hi Cardy,
    Very sweet pem indeed. Very lovely words and thoughts expressed here.
    Have a great day
    Sincerley Lee Ness

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Mar 17, 2010

    Wow Cardy, what a beautiful image you have created here that becomes vividly clear within my minds eye. I especially enjoyed the ending of a special kiss. Thank You once again for sharing your wonderful talents with all of us and more imporantly for giving us more of you through your gift of writing…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • giftarist on Mar 17, 2010

    Lovely and light piece. Thank you for sharing cardy.

  • Olivia Van Logum on Mar 17, 2010

    What a lovely, romantic poem x

  • Yalonda on Mar 17, 2010

    Very pretty! I can see it in my mind so clearly!

  • David De Jesus on Mar 17, 2010

    Beautiful! A very vivid poem. Thank so much for the share.

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