I found you then you were gone.

Whenever I see you my life turned bright,

The days were exciting and my heart was light,

I met you once and thought it would linger,

But I’m a confused heart, don’t know how to go further.

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Days passed by and you were gone,

I’m left alone with a remorseful ponder,

How did it happen I was unsure,

But love’s lost and gone forever.

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  • jaysonv on Dec 26, 2009

    Great post very interesting and informative.. I like it..Thanks!

    - jaysonv

  • drelayaraja on Dec 26, 2009

    very nicely written :)

  • V rank on Dec 26, 2009

    oh… that hurts…

  • AlmaG on Dec 26, 2009

    May be it’s not meant to be.

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 26, 2009

    Sad one…

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 26, 2009

    Losing out on love is a tough one; and when a person doesn’t know why love is lost that makes it even more difficult. Love can be a mystery.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 28, 2009

    great feelings…u have nicely expressed your feelings..

  • albert1jemi on Dec 28, 2009

    beautiful words well written

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 30, 2009

    This was filled with pain. You have expressed it very well. God bless you

  • Patrick Regoniel on Dec 30, 2009

    Thanks Dear Friends. This is actually my first time to write a poem. I discovered that poems make the heart light.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 1, 2010

    Great post…

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