Reverie from an older point of view.

He looked in the mirror and it told him the truth–
He was definitely getting a bit long in the tooth.
Somewhere, somehow he had run out of youth.
He fixed a martini and held the vermouth.
             
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What happened to time that he had so much of?
What became of the women he wanted to love?
He looks out the window at stars up above
And remembers the call of the sad mourning dove.
                   
                  image via wikipedia

Maybe the mirror needs adjusting a bit.
Perhaps he could just simply calibrate it
To make it reflect the image of a handsomely fit 
Young man in his prime, not this old piece of twit.
                  
                  image via wikipedia

He knows what he needs to make him dance on air–
A young brown eyed maiden with raven black hair.
She’d bring back his vigor–make him debonair.
Dream on, old man, in your Easy-Lift chair. 

 

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  • NYRETT on Dec 24, 2009

    It’s what’s on the inside that counts. There’s nothing wrong with being long in the tooth. Men are ageless. Take it from an old hub.

  • Lord Banks on Dec 24, 2009

    Nice poem Ken I always say “Your as old as the woman you feel!” lucky for me my partner is significantly younger than me! Happy Holidays to you Ken-ster.

  • jaysonv on Dec 24, 2009

    great poem.. thanks for posting.. Merry Christmas friend.

  • Reilley on Dec 24, 2009

    I am right behind you my friend.

  • bailieman on Dec 24, 2009

    Very witty, you could always take down the mirrors!

  • wonder on Dec 24, 2009

    This is beyond comment.Inspiring!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 24, 2009

    A wonderful and humerous piece as always, Ken. You’ll never be long in the tooth to me, while you can write like this. I hope you enjoy your Christmas.

    Christine

  • Hazel Crowther on Dec 24, 2009

    Nice poem. Wishing you a Merry Christmas, peace & happiness and a prosperous New Year.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 24, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • deep blue on Dec 24, 2009

    A brilliant read. Recalibrate your mirror, Ken. A merry christmas to you.

  • AlmaG on Dec 24, 2009

    May be old but very young at heart. Merry Christmas! ^_^

  • johnnydod on Dec 24, 2009

    Age is just a number Ken
    As you may well know,
    With a man its not just how, Ken
    With a man its when, you know
    Just stay cool Ken, just go with the flow
    Now I knew you were a writer Ken
    but dam I didn’t know it
    your more then a writer Ken
    Your a bloody poet.

    Merry Christmas Ken From me and Dolly

  • stryka66 on Dec 24, 2009

    Nice work, Ken – loved your ‘fantasy’ of the young maiden with the raven black hair – yes !

  • Sheila M on Dec 24, 2009

    I don’t know why you don’t write more poetry. I just love it to death….especially those that come from the heart. Maybe we should all take down the mirrors then we wouldn’t be so critical of ourselves or others. (I shouldn’t talk. I should just take my own advice of myself lol) Everyone is right…it’s only a number and you are very sweet. Hope santa treats you good this year:)

    Merry Christmas Ken!
    xoxo

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 24, 2009

    And I thought gentlemen preferred blonds, lol. As always you never cease to amaze me, Ken. I won’t say no more for fear of being redundant.

  • standingproud on Dec 24, 2009

    awww so sweet.
    so clever.
    I admire your well penned words Ken.
    I wish your dreams and desires are fulfilled in every way possible for you.
    Merry Xmas Ken. :)

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 24, 2009

    Very inspiring, what a great poem. :)

  • Melody SJAL on Dec 25, 2009

    Very nice choice of words.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Dec 25, 2009

    Do I hear a memory in there? My aunty says youth is wasted on the young…they don’t know how to appreciate it. You are aging like fine wine, Mr. Bultman. I always watch for your stories and poetry.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 25, 2009

    great poem..great work

  • Zappy on Dec 25, 2009

    Merry Christmas!!!

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 26, 2009

    Ken, It’s one of your best yet. You are young at heart and that is what counts. Well, what else can we do? We can’t subtract the years. So staying young at heart should count for something.

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 26, 2009

    Aww, this was such a sweet poem Ken. I think I saw a new side of you :|

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 26, 2009

    Age is just a number, Ken. I am sure you’re very young at heart!!

  • lillyrose on Dec 27, 2009

    So very lovely!:-)

  • PR Mace on Dec 28, 2009

    I live with an older man now he is 52 and I am 50. I love my old man. Lovely piece.

  • Emma Green on Jan 5, 2010

    Another mind blowing piece with humour too! You clearly are a true poet.

  • mo hoyal on Jan 20, 2010

    You are precious and debonaire to me!

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