Inspired from Eirene by Luis Royo posted on Elleword’s profile page.

Bathed in fire exquisitely bright

The perfect depiction with skin flawlessly painted

Intense eruptions shoot forth from imagination

Showers trickle upwards stimulating her breasts

Inspiring kisses covering the shame of nakedness  

His eyes make her feel, extraordinarily his

Making love to her imperfections

Emotions overwhelmed

Collecting her tears, planting them gently

Taking in every sensation

Her flavored scent rests on his chin

She enjoys tasting the ripen sound

Joined as one writhing on the ground

Seeding soil row upon row

Finger tips touch in a love locked stare

Romanticism returns

And for a time did not disappear

Lying as one clothed by the coolness of night

Every whisper from him is like the coming of morning

Warm sunlit expectations

Melting his masculinity

Giving life to her femininity  

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  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Jan 30, 2010

    Awesome imagery. “making love to her imperfections.”

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Jan 30, 2010

    Great title too.

  • AlmaG on Jan 30, 2010

    I love it! you are such a talented poet :)

  • Jenilia12 on Jan 30, 2010

    very inspiring one…

  • giftarist on Jan 31, 2010

    Awesome use of words. Very well done. ^_^

  • Anupam Kachroo on Jan 31, 2010

    loved the imagery , quite vivid …
    gr8..

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 31, 2010

    That reminds me I need to do some gardening…just kidding. This poem blossoms in my heart :)

  • alensmith on Jan 31, 2010

    nice one keep it up

  • XXElleXX on Jan 31, 2010

    Intelligent and sexy T. S. Lewis…erotic imagery without the need to refer to the picture in question ;-) … human desire, human curiosity, human observation,…thank you my friend :-)

  • sandie on Jan 31, 2010

    i think you need a cold shower to cool down lol! nice poem

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 31, 2010

    Lovely and sensual!

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