Immaculately loving with an amazing perception.

Taste  

The soft palate of sweetness from my tongue’s diction

Feel  

Slowly surging impulses throb with warm pasty ooze  

Hear

Irregularities beating skins, trembling as bass pounds like a drum

Smell

The light coat of sexual scents cover a silken delight

See

Sensitized chills stimulate moist licks blown dry from exhales

Intuitively

Loving you from your skin to your inner most part

Making you wonder if it’s real or just a dream

 

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  • Valerie Curtiss on Jan 9, 2010

    Sensual poetry

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jan 9, 2010

    Wow…really a gr8 poem.

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 9, 2010

    You captured your senses beautifully

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Jan 9, 2010

    Definitely sensual poetry and it can’t get better than this.
    You are a great poet.

  • sandie on Jan 9, 2010

    love this

  • Poetic Enigma on Jan 9, 2010

    Wow, emotions captured well, beautifully composed piece

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jan 9, 2010

    The word painting is superb TS. When you can feel the writers emotions, you know it had an affect.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 10, 2010

    Wow! That’s really hot and beautifully written.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 10, 2010

    Beautiful poem!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 14, 2010

    I read it before
    But couldn’t comment
    As my lap top was
    About to lament
    But now I clearly say
    I have only the sixth sense
    That’s all I can display
    Why I shall say
    Another day.

    lh

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