A puppy love, innocent feeling…my first broken heart. -"Love Untold" 2002-

I think of love as sweet as candy

Ever since I’ve longed to have it with me

Now that I’m in the situation

It was never a mirror of my imagination

It tastes as bitter as a Brandy

I can’t swallow so I spit it immediately

Why were they saying?

That love is sweet tasting…

Love is nothing but a curse

Nothing comes better but just worse

My heart had scattered all over

Can never bring it back ever

Loving is a painful experience

All those years of my existence

No one loves true and lasting

Don’t know if I should keep on loving…

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  • Analyst on Nov 24, 2010

    Very sweet poem! Thanks for sharing those emotions! Love is the highest form of feelings amongst people!

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