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Loving Pain…

jaysonv on Dec 13, 2009
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This is a poem about experiencing the pain of LOVE… :(

                       

My heart starts to cry,
The time you said goodbye
My love was true
And yours was no.

My love is like a genie
That gives u plenty
Of everything you like
Of everything you want

My love had given you all
Every time you made a call
It needs no payback
Just be white and black

My love had sacrificed
And accepted all the lies
It tries to be blind
And never look behind

And here you are now
Forgetting my love somehow
Walking with another
And swaying like lover

My heart just bleed
A blood of rose red
Thorns wrapped it up
And gently tearing up

Why have you done this?
Will you tell me please?
Don’t made me a fool
That would easily fall

Pretensions…
Misconceptions…
Doubts
And fear…

Generous love,
Understanding love,
Pitiful love,
Unreciprocated love…

Pain…
Pain…
Pain…
Pain…

- Roseller Suico Fiel II

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  • Will Dee on Dec 13, 2009

    I feel the emotional pain expressed in this piece. Thanks for sharing.

  • johnnydod on Dec 13, 2009

    i think we have all been there

  • Midie on Dec 13, 2009

    Maybe she is not the one, the one you looking for is looking for you.

  • jaysonv on Dec 13, 2009

    yes we all have been or experienced this painful love..

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 13, 2009

    Heartache…………….. :(

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 13, 2009

    Your emotions came through clearly in this poem, thanks for being able to open yourself to such a core level.

  • Melinda McQueen on Dec 13, 2009

    Nicely written.

  • Dhanan Sarwo utomo on Dec 13, 2009

    cool

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 14, 2009

    Really a good poem

  • ReggieLutz on Dec 14, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • Citra Florenca on Dec 14, 2009

    It tears my heart to read it! very nice

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 14, 2009

    This happens with almost every person in the earth…

  • jaysonv on Dec 14, 2009

    Yes I agree with u cutedrishti8..

  • Kady on Dec 14, 2009

    Wow!!

  • Peter Cimino on Dec 14, 2009

    We’ve all been there, that’s for sure.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 14, 2009

    u draw lots of empathy

    i know pain hurts

    but we have to learn

    to bear it

  • ladydryle on Dec 15, 2009

    we can all experience this…

  • jaysonv on Dec 16, 2009

    yes definitely..

  • Marcuz Best on Dec 16, 2009

    nice poem.. i love it..

  • PR Mace on Dec 16, 2009

    I can feel your emotions throughout the verses.

  • Roseller S. Fiel, II on Dec 17, 2009

    wow!!!!!!!

    i was never expecting that people will actually like this one, Jayson amega, thanks for posting this work of mine, hehehehehe… and for those who sympathize with the speaker, thank you also. made out of intense emotion.

  • jaysonv on Dec 18, 2009

    Its my pleasure Fiel.. Keep it up.. :)

  • ladydryle on Dec 19, 2009

    nice one..

  • George Mendoza on Dec 21, 2009

    nice poem.. i really like it. Thanks to you.

  • jaysonv on Dec 22, 2009

    thanks Ladydryle..

  • Roberto Aceberos on Dec 24, 2009

    great poem..

  • jaysonv on Dec 26, 2009

    thanks Roberto..

  • jaysonv on Dec 27, 2009

    MERRY CHRISTMAS AND ADVANCE HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!!! :)

  • jaysonv on Dec 28, 2009

    keep on publishing interesting articles guys! Thanks.. Happy New Year everyone!

  • Krupali on Jun 27, 2010

    I loved this one! Your words just echo my feelings!

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