Just a thought about love.

Loving someone requires the lover to let go,

for to hold on tightly to the loved one

un-frees the beloved from becoming who one is.

Painful such a movement is.

A decision that rends the heart

as it allows the loved one to grow.

Ah, love.

But, to let go is to be free,

for in freeing the other,

one becomes free as well.

For someone who has truly loved

and has been loved as much,

one knows that if love is true,

though the loved one is free,

the lover knows that the beloved

will forever belong to one’s heart and soul,

just as the lover belongs to the beloved for life.

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Comments (9)
  • drelayaraja on Nov 20, 2009

    Love has a telling effect.

  • mundanely sacred on Nov 20, 2009

    Yes, drelayaraja. You are right. Love is such a paradox that only in its being such will it be understood.

  • live and lovin life on Nov 20, 2009

    i love the message in this poem

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 20, 2009

    lovely

  • Sukhdarshan on Nov 21, 2009

    wonderful poem with a message…erupting straight from the heart..

  • Penggaroo on Nov 23, 2009

    That’s good write. Keep up :)

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 24, 2009

    very nice, but don’t set it free too much because you could lose her that way too. lol

  • Moron Savant on Dec 3, 2009

    learn from sunshine926… never set it free completely. hehehe.

  • mundanely sacred on Feb 10, 2010

    Moron S, for life naman eh, di ba? hehehe.

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