You came to me like a ice and melted away from my life.

I loved you every moment you stayed,

I loved you every time your lips murmured and said,

I loved you every time you stared,

I loved you when your face in sunlight glared.

Never thought you be like an ice,

You made me feel cold and so nice.

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Slowly slowly you melt with time,

still I believed it was natural and fine.

A day came when you escaped from my hand,

not as ice but as water that flowed away like desert sand.

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There was that piercing moment in life,

Those beautiful moments hurt me like knife.

As time went I had then wisely realised,

You were in my hand like a ice.

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Comments (11)
  • OLUWAFISAYO ADENIYAN on Apr 17, 2009

    love your poem.

  • Juhls on Apr 17, 2009

    Wow, great prose, similes/comparison to ice.

  • Sheila on Apr 17, 2009

    Sad when those things fade away…nice poem

  • thestickman on Apr 20, 2009

    kewl :-)

  • Luffy12 on Apr 20, 2009

    ^_^

  • kate smedley on Apr 20, 2009

    Lovely poem

  • nutuba on Apr 21, 2009

    I like the imagery of the melting ice slipping away!

  • Caroline1957 on Apr 23, 2009

    enjoyed it.

  • LOVELY HONEY on Apr 26, 2009

    ur lucky ,
    many get lovers ,
    like a statue of liberty ,
    u cannot reach it ,
    nor urself set free.

    so ice at least,

    melts away,

    and helps u find,
    another one,
    for some other day
    lh

  • M A Bhanpurwala on May 8, 2009

    really enjoyed

  • CutestPrincess on May 9, 2009

    what a lovely poem….

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