Comments on: Loving You Was Like Holding Ice

By: coldheart

coldheart — Tue, 12 Apr 2011 04:47:10 +0000

beautiful poem..
but i was kinda distracted by the errors in your grammar….
it would be a shame to let wrong grammar
take the best of your works…
either than that, keep up the good work..
i wish you more the inspiration…

By: CutestPrincess

CutestPrincess — Sat, 09 May 2009 06:28:09 +0000

what a lovely poem….

By: M A Bhanpurwala

M A Bhanpurwala — Fri, 08 May 2009 13:17:21 +0000

really enjoyed

By: LOVELY HONEY

LOVELY HONEY — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 14:00:38 +0000

ur lucky ,
many get lovers ,
like a statue of liberty ,
u cannot reach it ,
nor urself set free.

so ice at least,

melts away,

and helps u find,
another one,
for some other day
lh

By: Caroline1957

Caroline1957 — Thu, 23 Apr 2009 11:36:41 +0000

enjoyed it.

By: nutuba

nutuba — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 11:47:45 +0000

I like the imagery of the melting ice slipping away!

By: kate smedley

kate smedley — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 17:48:45 +0000

Lovely poem

By: Luffy12

Luffy12 — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 14:50:23 +0000

^_^

By: thestickman

thestickman — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 13:39:46 +0000

kewl

By: Sheila

Sheila — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 22:56:25 +0000

Sad when those things fade away…nice poem