..against the blues…

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Lowering my head,

in weepy dreams.

Cliffs of Dover down,

by greeny seas,

where once we walked.

Hand in hand, watery

splashes of sunsets gone.

Palisade the pale

palm I kiss in memories.

Here comes that little 

girl who dreamed of

happy endings.

Sear her with 

cascading tides.

But sometimes,

I am on cliffs of

blues of softy down.

Where I weep with you.

Sunsets of splashy tides

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  • Vivek Ratan on Oct 18, 2011

    palm I kiss in memories …is marvelous

    where once we walked hand in hand is so touching

    where I weep with you is extremely affectionate expression

  • VoIP on Oct 18, 2011

    Thank you Mr. Ratan. I appreciate your comments on my poem.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 18, 2011

    Me gusta.

  • VoIP on Oct 18, 2011

    Thank you A.

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 18, 2011

    Thank for the piece.

  • VoIP on Oct 19, 2011

    Thank you.

  • OrmusNation on Oct 19, 2011

    Nicely written, keep up the good work!

  • yes me on Oct 21, 2011

    Cheers for this one too

  • VoIP on Oct 21, 2011

    Thank you for reading.

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