Itching a scratch.

Sliding down the hillside, speed unknown to man,

Clawing at the rock face, catch me if you can;

Making sudden movements, standing on the edge,

Listening to the heartbeat, swinging from the ledge;

I hear you come behind me, I turn to watch your face,

Your hunger it devours you, my fear is out of place;

Anticipation nearing, pleasure close behind,

I want you deep inside me, I want you in my mind;

Grabbing me towards you, clutching at my throat,

Strange and frenzied feelings, I see you taking note;

Grave and certain danger, climax whispering,

Damage my intention, make it really sting;

Bite my every movement, break my every bone,

Turn me into insanity, ecstasy, then stone;

Fly me into heaven, banish me to hell,

Cover me in discomfort, you know me so well;

Slide your hand beneath me, rip into my core,

Dance with my emotions, make me feel raw;

Cast aside my dignity, use me as you wish,

Now the fight is over, we’ve reached the finish.

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Comments (5)
  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 2, 2010

    Nice….

  • rkm123 on Jan 2, 2010

    very nice good job i liked it

  • T. S. Lewis on Jan 2, 2010

    An overly erotic piece that I had to read twice :)

  • L R Humphries on Jan 2, 2010

    Fast paced and well written, a very good read….

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 2, 2010

    I nearly saw the electric eel in you twisting, twirling simply dancing squeezing in to the juices of life
    With utmost amazement
    And ecstatic agony

    Oh how I wish
    I could be with thee
    The electric sparks
    We combinedly give
    Come out like fireworks
    How sex would’ve

    Come out as electric sparks
    How sex works
    How sex works
    How sex alone works
    It’s all totally free
    Without any perks

    Sex is that flame
    That eels only will spark
    When it’s spasmodic
    The orgasm will
    For ever and ever last

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