A prelude to lust.

Carnal Lust

Intertwining lust
In decadent opulence
Sensuous symphony

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Carnal Lust

© Lady Sunshine

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  • Coleen Hazeldine on May 25, 2011

    Interesting. I shall read the rest.

  • Shirley Shuler on May 25, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, I reread carnal lust, and I still say, the title said it all.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 26, 2011

    Wonderful use of these colourful words. I really enjoyed the haiku.

  • Sharif Ishnin on May 26, 2011

    Good reminder on your best work.:)

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on May 26, 2011

    I like your haiku, and use of lovely words. Awesome

  • Starpisces on May 26, 2011

    sentimental poem from a sentimental poet, commented by a sentimental commenter.

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