A poem I wrote about macdonalds food.

as i bite into the beef-cardboard

it satifies me

the perfect blend

the perfect cheese

dipped in ketchup

so good

the perfect amount of salt

so tasty

fried in oil

as i take a sip

wonderful

cool liquid runs down my throat

a macdonalds meal

so delecious

so unhealthy

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  • raman13 on Aug 22, 2009

    Great Stuff

    Interesting

    Best regards

  • Karen Gross on Aug 23, 2009

    Why does the food that tastes the best have to be the unhealthy stuff? Imagine a world where the broccoli tastes like ice cream and the green beans like chocolate. Oh well!

  • Dark Angel33 on Aug 24, 2009

    that world will never become

  • abby luna on Aug 25, 2009

    wow all of a sudden i am craving macdonalds!

  • rutherfranc on Aug 27, 2009

    no pics? dang.. this made me hungry..

  • Dark Angel33 on Aug 28, 2009

    strange how unhealthy food is what is most addicting.
    and inspiring, since i was eating macdonals when i wrote this!
    so good
    yet so unhealthy
    and addicting

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