Just a poem.

 

I sat there silently wondering.

I spent the afternoon pondering.

My mind was a jumbled mess.

There were wrinkles in my dress.

A decision was needing to be made.

My kids were asking for Kool-aid.

I didn’t know which flavor to fix.

Eventually I chose a red mix.

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Comments (14)
  • amandeep13 on Feb 24, 2010

    Brilliant Write

    Best Regards.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Feb 24, 2010

    enjoyed this muches
    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your ♥ Shine
    ~ milty

  • Jamie Myles on Feb 24, 2010

    Ahhh, the earth shattering decisions we must make each day!
    Good one.

  • chellsy on Feb 24, 2010

    great poem

  • Sourav on Feb 24, 2010

    Very rhythmic, good one.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 24, 2010

    I really loved your poem.

  • giftarist on Feb 24, 2010

    Good read. Thank you!

  • chefpete41 on Feb 24, 2010

    life changing decisions and red cool-aid all in one day.
    nice!

  • STEVE666 on Feb 24, 2010

    Kool-aid??

  • albert1jemi on Feb 24, 2010

    great share

  • petercurtis97 on Feb 25, 2010

    Very interesting

  • Yvonne K on Feb 25, 2010

    lovely

  • Enjoy The Joy on Feb 26, 2010

    lovely!

  • T. S. Lewis on Mar 3, 2010

    You can never go wrong with Red

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