Caution: open all windows and doors. Run the shower till cold. Ladies – take a breath.

Sleek is the Man,
so bold, so strong,
Silent in stealth,
no fear, on guard,
Riding the night,
forceful, profound,
A striking sight,
Gallant, on ground,
Intense in his stride,
Glorious in his stance,
Strength inside,
Steel in his grip,
Wanton in his eyes,
Power to his hip,
Sleek as he glides,
Toned to the touch,
his gift to all Women,
Sliding in forbidden grounds

© Marie Milton

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  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 7, 2009

    nice one share..Great work..

  • BullwinkleMuse on Sep 7, 2009

    It’s not an easy task to create such vivid descriptions with such an economy of words. Very nicely done.

  • agriculi on Sep 7, 2009

    I thought it was the other way around.

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 7, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Lily River on Sep 7, 2009

    Hot! Simply striking! Gotta cool off. Nicely done!

  • martie on Sep 8, 2009

    Great poem though nothing like my man.

  • giftarist on Sep 8, 2009

    Nice one!

  • lillyrose on Sep 10, 2009

    Mmm… I think he sounds like a noble knight, he can carry me away from it all anytime! lovely well written poem.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 10, 2009

    I always considered woman
    As the greatest gift
    For man
    Without a receptacle
    The sperm would have been just
    Wastefully spent
    The nature’s kindness abounds
    Blessed is a man
    Who a lover
    In a woman has found
    So you may change your views
    Man may be strong in bed
    But without a woman
    A man is dead.

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