About a helpless, confused and lost guy.

Undecided,
Lost control.
Faceless mannequin,
Empty soul.

Undiscovered,
Distant places.
Remote feelings,
Blank gazes.

Unrecognized,
No identity.
Emotions less,
Far proximity.

Unknown,
A nobody.
Trapped inside,
Himself only.

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Comments (3)
  • Melody SJAL on Mar 22, 2009

    Very well-expressed…subtle yet precise. Nice one.

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 23, 2009

    This one really got to me, lovely poem

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 31, 2009

    Nice one!
    Thanks,
    Clay

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