Many Types of Drinks – a poem.

Many Types of Drinks

When you stay in, you drink my gin.
If I kick you out, you take my stout.
If I’m out with my chum, you drink my rum.
When you drink all my beer, I shed a tear.

You’re a problem to me, as all can see,
You’re causing me stress and anxiety!
From now on you must drink fruit juice and water,
After all you are my ten year old daughter!

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  • drelayaraja on Dec 29, 2009

    wonderful :)

  • drelayaraja on Dec 29, 2009

    Wonderful :-)

  • Val Mills on Dec 30, 2009

    Lol – clever little piece.

  • BB2010 on Dec 30, 2009

    If its not too risky, I’ll take your whiskey?
    BB

  • richardpeeej on Dec 30, 2009

    I’ve sent it today -the Hereford way!

  • V rank on Jan 1, 2010

    and i drink all of these type of drink… cheers… thanks…!

  • richardpeeej on Jan 1, 2010

    So do I Franklin-cheers to you and a happy new year !

  • simplyoj on Jan 2, 2010

    ha..ha..nice.

  • richardpeeej on Jan 2, 2010

    Thanks simplyoj

  • SongbirdB on Jan 17, 2011

    Very witty, Like the twist at the end, Richard….I am more a wine drinker myself…..lol

  • richardpeeej on Jan 17, 2011

    I am that too Songbird….I wouldn’t like to miss out on anything…
    Thank you for your visit, please sit down and I will fetch you a cup of latte and a cream cake…..lol

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